Batman has captured Joker and sent him to Arkham Asylum. ''Something feels fishy'' says Batman. As they get to Jokers cell he breaks free of his cuffs and asks his assistant to the gate. ''You fell for my trap Batman, GLORIOUSLY!'' yells Joker. Batman gets out of the asylum to find Joker. He ends up in a hospital with hostages. Batman saves them and then encounters Bane. "I will kill you Bat''says Bane. But Batman beats him up. Joker comes up behind Batman and stabs him. ''Arghh'' yells Batman in agony. But he beats Jokers face up and sends him back to gotham into blackgate prison.
Friday, 10 January 2020
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Kia Ora Joe,
ReplyDeleteWhat a creative and very exciting story, I was kept on the edge of my seat the whole time I was reading it! Great job on making sure that all of the names of the characters began with a capital letter!
I see that your story is about the superhero Batman, is he your favourite superhero? What do you like about Batman? I think that my favourite part about Batman is his bravery, I also really like the batmobile! I actually have a video game that I like to play on the playstation that follows Batman’s journey - it is so much fun!
Some of the words you used in this story were great! You used very vivid descriptive words such as gloriously and agony which helped to paint the scene of your story into my head.
Make sure you read over your work to make sure all the sentences make sense before you post it.
Ngā mihi maioha
Charlotte
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