Poem about stepping on the moon
I land on the silver moon seconds after thinking about my doom, Avast ! , I made a small step like a man for my nan, I take a gigantic leap for the mankind on earth , and think about the brave , terrifying accomplishment I have done and deserve a ice cream on waffle cone.
Saturday, 4 January 2020
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Kia Ora Joe,
ReplyDeleteKa Pai on your poem about landing on the moon, it was very cool! I like how you rhymed most of the lines - very creative. I agree, you would have to be very brave to land walk on the moon, but it would also be very exciting! Would you want to travel to the moon?
I think that space is so cool! If you could go to any planet, which one would you go to? What do you think you would see there? Do you think you would find aliens?
I noticed that at the end of your poem you said that you deserved an ice-cream cone, is ice-cream your favourite food? It is mine! My favourite type of ice-cream is either chocolate or jelly-tip, what’s yours?
Noho ora mai
Charlotte
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