This is my Chorus. If pretty is like that song made by the college but I made mine in my own words. I chose that of Naruto because he never gave up and never lost hope even though he was the weakest in his class but ended becoming the strongest in all nations.
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thanks Reece
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey. I am glad to see you are all registered now your posts are getting marked for points!
I really enjoyed this activity and all the creative and inspirational lyrics everyone has written. I like that the inspiration for your song lyrics is the anime Naruto which is quite an inspirational show about strength and never giving up and your lyrics represented that well. I especially liked the line 'don't let the face that you are a failure put you down’, to mean it means to not be upset when you fail and to continue to work and try until you succeed.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates
Kia Ora Zana ,
DeleteThank you for the feedback. I feel as if i have done a really good job because that like the first sort of song that I have actually made and feel proud of myself that you liked it.
Have you ever created a song? What was it about?
Nga Mihi
Joe Singh
Hi Zana , Thanks for the feedback.
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